A New Website for the Louisiana Department of Agriculture and Forestry

Screenshot of an LDAF website page titled "Supporting agriculture producers and sellers"

My first project at Ad Hoc LLC was an overhaul of a state agency’s website, the Louisiana Department of Agriculture and Forestry (LDAF). Check out the website we launched last fall at: ldaf.la.gov. 🎉

Partnering with LDAF stakeholders, we were able to improve task success rates, reduce time on task, and increase user confidence in the website overall. I led research for the project, which included market/competitor analysis, a top tasks survey, card sorting, tree testing, first-click testing, and usability testing (pre- and post). There was also a ton of information architecture and content strategy work.

It comes as no surprise to most that government websites can be hard to use. And getting a chance to improve this website for the people of Louisiana was really rewarding.

Learn more about the project:

Writing for the Web: a 30 minute overview

I created a video presentation for this semester’s UX4Justice class, so I’m sharing it here along with an overview of the content:

Why it matters

The #1 reason people visit websites is for the content. They want their questions answered.

How people tend to read on the web

  • Skim: They skim for headings and keywords, often in an F-shaped pattern.
  • Hunt: They hunt for links and buttons that will take them to the right place.
  • Muddle through: They try different things and often don’t take the path you’d expect.

How people might feel on the web

  • Impatient: The first 10 seconds is critical.
  • Distracted: They’ll often be doing multiple things at once.
  • Frustrated: Bad writing can quickly cause people to leave.

Tip #1: Conversational. Speak directly to website visitors.

  • Write like you talk.
  • Use active voice.
  • Use fragments.

Tip #2: Relevant. Speak directly to users’ questions.

  • Define your audience for your website.
  • Define your audience, page by page.

Tip #3: Focused. Prioritize and simplify your messages.

  • Prioritize top tasks.
  • Use the inverted pyramid.
  • Keep things short.
  • Simplify phrases.
  • Remove the unnecessary.

Tip #4: Clear. Make your content accessible to as many people as possible.

  • Avoid ambiguity.
  • Provide help at the point of need.
  • Avoid long noun phrases.
  • Make links clearly links.
  • Format nicely.

Tip #5: Organized. Use structure to facilitate navigation.

  • Use parallelism.
  • Use meaningful headings.
  • Use meaningful link labels.
  • Make clear calls to action.

See the full slide deck.

Writing Accessible Web Content

I’ve written and taught on the topic of web content for a number of years. And this past year, I’ve been thinking a lot about how our content decisions impact the accessibility and inclusivity of our websites.

Last month, I presented the keynote at a Ferris State University’s symposium, Web Content for Everyone: Usability, Accessibility, and Content Creation. The audience included web developers, marketers, instructors, writers, and other staff from across campus.

The goal of this presentation was to cover the key principles to creating content that is useful, usable, and accessible to all. I discuss techniques including plain language, heading structure, content prioritization, meaningful links, alternative text, and more. My 5 tips for better, more inclusive web content are:

  1. Know your audience. Create content with your readers in mind.
  2. Keep it focused and simple. Reduce cognitive load with straightforward and succinct content.
  3. Focus on clarity. Strive for immediate comprehension.
  4. Organize and structure. Your content flow should be intentional, point-of-need, and easy to skim.
  5. Make it readable. Be intentional with font choice, white space, and formatting.

Big thanks to Ferris State for inviting me, and for recording and captioning the presentation!


Tips for Making Better Forms

icon of a form

Forms are prevalent across the web, yet so many are poorly designed. They can quickly become a source of frustration.

Last year, Ann Shivers-McNair and I bonded over our passion for form content and design. So we developed a presentation on making better forms for people, presented at edUi last October.

Forms have been on my mind a lot recently, and I thought it would be useful to unpack the presentation into some of the key principles and considerations for easy reference. And I’ve added and slightly revised a couple based on other things I’m learning. So here goes.

3 key principles

Simplicity. Avoid the complicated and unnecessary.

  • Avoid instructions on how to fill out the form
  • Make sure every field serves a purpose
  • Get rid of any unnecessary fields (e.g. phone number, fax number, birthdate)
  • Never require a field if you don’t really need it

Inclusivity. Create forms for everyone.

  • Avoid jargon
  • Avoid legalese
  • Write like you talk
  • Be inclusive in your options

Readability. Use logical sequencing and follow conventions.

  • Be succinct
  • Place field labels above the field
  • Left justify, rag right
  • Allow for lots of white space
  • Use sentence case

Small but mighty considerations

Form names. Make it clear what you’re doing.

  • Start with a precise action verb (e.g. “Apply,” “Request”)
  • Use an action verb in the link to the form, too (e.g. “RSVP for event”)
  • Avoid too many nouns in a row

Optional vs. required fields. Make them intuitive to recognize. (Be aware these conventions are a moving target and may depend upon audience).

  • Most fields should be required
  • Indicate which fields are optional by saying optional
  • Be consistent in how you indicate required vs. optional fields
  • Asterisks are a common convention to mean “required”

Name fields. Make them inclusive.

  • Don’t limit character length (or if you must limit, make that limit 70 characters for full name or 50 characters for first name or last name)
  • Don’t force first-letter capitalization (e.g. charley)
  • Don’t prevent capitalization of a second name or within a name (e.g. Bonnie Jean; McClelland)
  • Allow hyphens in names (e.g. Sykes-Casavant)
  • Use one “Full name” field over separate “First name” and “Last name” field, unless it’s really necessary

Gender fields. Make them inclusive.

  • Avoid binary gender selectors
  • Allow write-in responses
  • Make it optional (when possible)

Selectors. Give clear options.

  • Pick a thoughtful default that’s either the most common answer or the first in a logical sequence
  • Put the most common options at the top, and for longer lists, use alphabetical sequencing
  • Use the right selector for the information you are soliciting (e.g. dropdowns, radio buttons, check boxes)

Question scope. Ask one question at a time.

  • Don’t combine multiple questions into one
  • Isolate the pieces of information you are asking for
  • Use logic to order questions that follow from previous information

Contextual help. Provide helpful hints at the appropriate time. (Be aware these conventions are a moving target and may depend on audience).

  • Use field labels to describe the field, and place them above the field
  • Use help text to provide an explanation or further information
  • Maybe use placeholder text to suggest the type of content you expect
  • Be cautious with placeholder text, and don’t use it as a substitute for field labels or help text

Feedback messages. Provide informative messages at the right time.

  • Make it clear when there are errors
  • Make it clear what any errors are
  • Don’t stress users out with error messages before it’s necessary
  • In confirmation messages, make it clear what the user just did and what to expect next

The slidedeck

Here’s the slidedeck that these tips were based on. It includes a few more details and a whole bunch of examples.

Hope you find this helpful! Please share comments on other things I should add.

Writing for the Web Course Lectures

I’ve taught Writing for the Web for Library Juice Academy for several years, the last time being this past March 2018. And I’m so pleased that the fabulous Heidi Burkhardt will be adapting it and teaching it in the future. My colleague Nicole Capdarest-Arest and I co-created this course back in 2014, and it’s been so much fun to teach.

So now seemed like a good time to share the lectures (I’m also sharing lectures from my other course on Usability Testing).

Much of the content is also covered in my book on writing effectively. Feel free to use and adapt, and I hope you enjoy!

Week One: Why Web Writing Matters

Why Web Writing Matters from Rebecca Blakiston on Vimeo.

Week Two: Organizing Web Content as a Conversation

Organizing Web Content as a Conversation from Rebecca Blakiston on Vimeo.

 Week Three: Standards, Style, Voice & Tone

Standards, Style, Voice & Tone from Rebecca Blakiston on Vimeo.

 Week Four: Formatting, Accessibility, and More

Diving Deeper: Formatting, Accessibility, & More from Rebecca Blakiston on Vimeo.

Building Your Content Strategy Toolkit

At Designing for Digital last month, I presented a 4-hour workshop on Building Your Content Strategy Toolkit. I appreciated hearing about other librarian’s content challenges, brainstorming over how to tackle them, and learning from each other throughout the day.

I’ve posted my slidedeck below and made it available along with associated activities at tinyurl.com/d4dcontent.

From the description:

Do you struggle with web content that is complicated, outdated, or irrelevant? In this workshop, learn how to identify content challenges, define messaging, create standards and style guides, and establish workflows to keep things going once a project is over. Whether you’re in the midst of a web project or just trying to get your feet wet, this workshop is for you.


Writing Effectively in Print and on the Web

It was a big effort, but I’m proud to announce my new book is out!
Order now: Writing Effectively in Print and on the Web: A Practical Guide for Librarians.

From the preface:

Writing plays a role in almost everything we do. It’s how we document our knowledge, share our stories, and ask our communities for help. It’s a tool to teach, influence, and persuade those around us. And in today’s digital age, we’re all publishers, sharing content with the world at the push of a button (literally). From webpages, to signage, to emails – writing is fundamental to our everyday lives.

Sadly, there is a lot of mediocre content out there: policy-driven websites with mountains of text, building signs that don’t actually tell you what you need to know, convoluted emails that leave you wondering, What was the point of that? Today’s reader is bombarded with endless streams of information and simply doesn’t have the time to sift through and make sense of it all.

Let’s do our part to end the madness. Writing Effectively in Print and on the Web: A Practical Guide for Librarians encourages you to put your readers at the heart of all your content, ensuring that it is engaging, relevant, and useful. You’ll learn techniques to write with clarity, precision, and purpose, which will serve you well in both your professional and personal life.

See more on Google Books or buy on Amazon. I hope you enjoy it.

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Writing for the Web at Internet Librarian

Writing for the web has long been a passion of mine. I presented on it back at edUi in 2013, Nicole Capdarest-Arest and I created the course for Library Juice Academy and I’m currently writing a book related to the topic.

At Internet Librarian this week, I was thrilled to present on it alongside David Lee King. It was a lot of fun – we talked about why web writing matters, why we’re not so good at it, and how we can do it a bit better. Sadly our third panelist, Elaine Meyer, wasn’t able to attend at the last minute, but I think David did her justice in presenting her content.

Thanks for everyone who came out and participated. It’s cool to see so many people interested in creating better experiences through better content. I had a blast. Here’s my slide deck:


Writing for the User Experience

I love content strategy, as you may know, and at the heart of content strategy is good content. And at the heart of good content is good writing. Heck, most of the content that libraries provide is in the form of the written word.

Because of this, when I was invited to write another book for the Rowman & Littlefield Practical Guides series, I decided to write it on this topic. The working title is Writing for the User Experience. It’s going to be all about writing with the user in mind. We hear a lot about user-centered design. Now let’s dig into one of the hardest (but most important) pieces: user-centered writing. Most of the writing I’ve seen on library websites – and on education sites in general – is overly complicated, disorganized, and lacking of any personality. It’s getting better (shout out to MIT and Cal Poly especially), but still needs some serious attention.
I’ve been a fan of Ginny Redish’s Letting Go of the Words for years, my first introduction to better writing for the web. A recent masterpiece on the topic is Ann Handley’s book Everybody Writes, which came out last year. Couldn’t put it down. It’s fantastic.

I’ve dabbled in the topic a lot over the past few years. I taught a course on writing for the web for Library Juice Academy with my former colleague Nicole Capdarest-Arest, and spoke at edUi back in 2013 on writing with users in mind. I’ve been working with our content strategist at the library to re-work all of our content, slowly making strides to improve the experience our users have with our written content.

My goal is to write something that’s practical for the librarian. I hope it leads to better content not just on our websites, but in all communication channels. Everywhere content touches the user experience (think: emails, web, brochures, posters, signage, social media). It’s going to be a fun book to write, and if all goes well the manuscript will be in next May and published in the fall. Wish me luck!